Both these poems are wonderful companions. I have always been struck by Seth's "scent of imminent rain", an inner state, as much as climatic disposition, and your "a triangle of sun" has the same erasing of duality :)
Yes! love the way you've put it - the erasure of duality. It is a particular kind of silence that brings on this state, perhaps. In that witnessing emerges a quality of presence and observation that is at once raw statement of fact, and felt truth. And yes Seth weaves it together perfectly. Thankyou for responding, and for the comment on the accompanying poem too :)
Both these poems are wonderful companions. I have always been struck by Seth's "scent of imminent rain", an inner state, as much as climatic disposition, and your "a triangle of sun" has the same erasing of duality :)
Yes! love the way you've put it - the erasure of duality. It is a particular kind of silence that brings on this state, perhaps. In that witnessing emerges a quality of presence and observation that is at once raw statement of fact, and felt truth. And yes Seth weaves it together perfectly. Thankyou for responding, and for the comment on the accompanying poem too :)